Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Luke's Rap (Though I prefer to call it poetry....)

"Walrus, Walrus"
by Luke Bechtel

Walrus, Walrus, rat-a-tat-tat
Beatin' on the bass drum with a baseball bat.

He knows what he's doing
When it comes to the bass
But when it comes to the snare
He don't know tres.

You see what I did there?
Tres is Spanish for three
But now I'm getting sidetracked
Unlike the busy bees

But an-y-way
You know this walrus
Plays bass
Just the drum
Not the six-string
He don't play it dumb
Just like I said before
He knows what he's doing
When it comes to the drum

That's all I've got to say
That's it for today
Can't think of any more
Dumb words or phrases.

(Critiquing it professionally, not as a mom, I frankly told him the ending needs work. )

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